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[Time in a Bottle]

I cant say enough

The first thing i thought of was a dream. Nearly impossible to focus on figment like concepts and shapes made a fantastic theme for the whole emotion, which in essence, is what this animation is in entirety. I also noticed the association of color and sound, which i could not get enough of during the sequences it was included. Honestly, the easiest way i can see this type of animation, or this animation in particular improving, is more color association, or rather, perhaps consider sparks or bursts of color in the black background to tie the animation and music together, though youve done a fine job already. fantastic. I believe i may have proved my summary wrong.

Gate-keeper-girl responds:

VERY GOOD, you actually got the dream concept. A+

I tried color association, but to me, color looks "cheap" if you use too many (know what I mean?)
But I think you're right. And I could have used a varied pallet.
A couple parts were originally animated with color, but the vagueness of the FBF didn't allow you to focus enough one what was going on, and the eye is lazy.
White works to show the CONCEPT of the object, rather than the real thing (Plato's cave, hur hur hur )

THANK YOU GRACIOUSLY.

-GKG